"Nau Mai haere mai - I am in a year 5 and 6 class called Kotuku at Mangonui School. My teacher is Miss Van der Voort.
Welcome to my reflective blog. Please remember I am learning to write my ideas clearly for an audience.
There may be mistakes but I look forward to your helpful, thoughtful and kind comments."
WALT write an explanation about the human body
Reflection-two intresting facts wrere that the skull is made out of 22.another one is that your head ways as much as a bowlling ball. one shocking fact was that you have 206 bones
What a wealth of information you produced here Harmony! Good work. The similies used are awesome as well as the numerous fun facts. Puctuation and paragraphing would add better structure and improve the readers understanding.
What a wealth of information you produced here Harmony! Good work. The similies used are awesome as well as the numerous fun facts. Puctuation and paragraphing would add better structure and improve the readers understanding.
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